Phil is a robot maker.He is the smartest person on his planet and he makes robots for a living.He is always happy because he always has someone to talk to.He is a kind man cause he makes robots to help people.And he always has a smile when he gives away a robot.He mainly talks to his robot squeaks, cause squeaks was the first robot he made and has always been there for him.Right now he is working on a protector robot that is going to guard all his stuff cause its been getting stolen.He always tries to make a difference on his planet so it is safe.and makes it a better place.And he has succeeded.
Wednesday, May 27, 2020
The Robot Maker! W7 Writing
Hi bloggers welcome back to my blog.Today I will be sharing with you my Writing Task.For this i had to pick a photo and then write a story about it.The picture I chose was called the robot maker.And then i had to right a story that was at least 9 sentences.My story had about 10 to 11 sentences.Have you wrote a story on a random image?
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Hi William, I love the story you wrote. It was very descriptive and it put a picture in my head about the person straight away. I like how you made it very positive because being positive is good for a good business. Keep up the good work. From Connor.
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